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Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 03:11PM Title: The beginning

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Very interesting start to the story.
Could it be that dear brother Daniel becomes a bit big-headed?
I'm looking forward to reading more.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 08:17AM Title: The beginning

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It's a quite intriguing approach. I'm really curious what you're going to do with this story.

A tiny detail, however, surprised me. How did the Dark Lord distinguish the twins? Or did he want to kill the both of them anyway, and Daniel happened to be the first by chance?

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for reading. Do you have any advice on how to improve my writing? Voldemort went for Daniel first because he is the older twin, the name plates on the cribs helped him out a fair bit.



Reviewer: Segovia Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 08:02AM Title: The beginning

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