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Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2017.04.15 - 01:03PM Title: A rift

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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.04.11 - 07:52PM Title: A rift

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I was worried about what was coming in this chapter, and rightly so. I cannot believe you turned the Weasley parents into such horrible people. They are bigoted and nasty. They have thrown an eleven child out of their house with no guidance where to go.Why not make Voldemort into a good egg? It is difficult to give a rating because it is well written but I do not like the story. This does not mean I will stop reading it.

Author's Response: Hey, thank you very much for reading and taking the time to write a review, it means a lot to me! Could you please elaborate on what you did not like about this chapter, so I can improve. I assume the way the elder Weasleys turned on Harry felt rushed, I will try to elaborate and give more background information about why characters take certain decisions in the future. If you have any further advice, please let me know!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.04.11 - 04:25AM Title: A rift

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Apparently Harry is not as smart as he thinks. He'll never be a good politician. Even though Arthur certainly overreacted, Harry is the living proof that Arthur’s opinion on Slytherins is based on the truth. He can be lucky that Ginny likes him so much.




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