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Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2017.04.18 - 04:57PM Title: Living at Hogwarts Part two

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Hmm. In the first chapter we learn that Harry is a pathetic coward, and for Snape to say that he's truly his mothers son seems like a huge insult to memory of Lily Potter. Contradictory character - his actions in Hogwarts doesn't correlate with a weak person from the first chapter.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.04.18 - 06:23AM Title: Living at Hogwarts Part two

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I was a wee bit surprised that Harry didn't fetch the 100 galleons from the Gringotts account before returning to Hogwarts.

Snape is so nice to Harry, it's almost creepy. I'm quite curious if it was Snape who betrayed Lily to Voldemort by passing the prophecy, or if you've changed that. I wouldn't be surprised if it was James who betrayed his wife and son to Voldemort to be spared. It would fit nicely into the image you paint of the Gryffindor's in your story.
Oh, and I'm curious who'll write into the diary next school year.

Interesting chapter. Thanks for sharing.


Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I am sorry about Gringotts, that was an overlook on my part. He did take around 80 galleons from the vault, leaving enough for Daniel to buy his school stuff to keep him from getting suspicious. Snape was, like in canon, the traitor but Harry is does not know this. Yet. I am looking forward to your response about how I handled the diary, I tried to give it my own little spin and I guess I can say without spoiling thart the diary marks the beginning of the actual plot.



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2017.04.18 - 05:44AM Title: Living at Hogwarts Part two

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How interesting a concept. I can't wait to read what happens next



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2017.04.15 - 01:10PM Title: Living at Hogwarts Part two

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This is first story that I think that madam pomfrey is worse then Snape and Voldemort , I think she alway be lousy person. In my opinion action speak louder then, her action said she don't care for students




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