Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
2017.04.26 - 08:42AM
Intriguing chapter! It made me wonder if Dumbledore somehow shrunk Daniels brain, or if he's been imperiused by either Arthur or Dumbledore.
Anyway, I'm glad that Ginny and Harry are quite a team already. I wouldn't be surprised if the two of them will become the young Dark Lord's apprentices through the diary. I'm, however, afraid that it would backfire on them because Harry certainly isn't as cunning as he thinks he is.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
2017.04.21 - 08:44PM
I really like the idea of there being twins, like in your story. The fact that they are very different is good, too.
I understand that English may not be your first language, but, maybe have a beta in English help you with your grammar. It would enhance your story so much.
Looking forward to Harry and Ginny starting their time at Hogwarts, properly.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading!
I recently looked into getting a Beta reader, but I am unsure on how to approach the topic.
I know there are Beta Tools on FFN.net and here, but I they seem rather... impersonal. If that`s the right word.
If you have any advice on how and where to look for possible Beta readers please let me know.