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Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.05.03 - 03:52PM Title: A new Family

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Interesting story. At first I thought, "God, not another Dark!Harry fic," but you managed to lure me in - though I'd say your Harry is grey at worst.

Now, your spelling and grammar badly need an editor, but that seems like you already know it.

Overall, I'm curious how their little plan to use Tom will backfire on them.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.05.03 - 03:58AM Title: A new Family

They're playing a dangerous game!
Thanks for the update!



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.05.03 - 03:58AM Title: A new Family

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They're playing a dangerous game!
Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.02 - 11:12AM Title: A new Family

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Thank you so much for another intriguing chapter.
I have a very bad feeling about the two of them using the diary. I'm curious in which way it'll backfire. I'm afraid the diary will use and corrupt the two of them at the end.
I'm curious when and how the soul bonding mentioned in the summary will happen.


Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review. The soulbonding arc has started with this chapter, it wil be roughly 6 chapters long.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.04.30 - 10:56PM Title: A new Family

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Good chapter. I like where you are taking us on your journey.


Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and leaving a review.




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