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Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.05.09 - 04:14AM Title: Learning

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Should I have a bad feeling about the ritual part, or is it the means that will create the soul bond?
Thanks for another intriguing chapter.

I was a bit confused about "Tom was happy to her" until the Knut has dropped that you meant "happy to hear", lol.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and pointing out, will fix it right away!



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.05.08 - 02:02PM Title: Learning

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Wow, so you actually used a Diffindo on Mrs Norris? Look, I am a dog person...but damn that was some cold blooded shit right there. Hogwarts is a veritable cornucopia of objects and living creatures that contain blood. I find it fascinating you went with murdering the pathetic old Squib's feline familiar.

None the less, I haven't had a wtf moment like that since browsing Brennus or GHL's stories. Brennus I am certain holds the SIYE record for magical mass scale murder...he even destroyed Earth that one time. None the less you have coaxed a review, which you have just read.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading an leaving a comment! I have to confess, Filch is, after with Umbridge and Snape, probably my least favourite character in the Harry Potter Universe. Seeing him suffer makes me smile.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.08 - 10:47AM Title: Learning

Thanks for clarification.
I must admit that I forgot that the soul fragment is in Harry's head, not in Daniel's. I know, I know, the 4th line in chapter 1. Suddenly some things about Harry are a wee bit more understandable to me now, lol.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.08 - 07:47AM Title: Learning

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Thank you so much for another update.

The progress with the diary is far too good. I fear that it won't last much longer until Tom strikes back. I'm afraid that that a huge surprise is waiting for Harry when he tries to destroy the diary. I'm looking forward to seeing his face when it happens.

I was a wee bit surprised that Daniel couldn't talk to the snakes when he duelled with Harry.

I'm still wondering about the soul-bonding. You said it started in the last chapter...hmm, maybe I've missed something and should re-read it. On the other hand, maybe a couple of chapter more are needed to really see it.

Howsoever, thanks again for the update.


Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and leaving a reply. I am sorry if I was unclear, the soul bonding arc has started, not the bonding itself. Daniel can`t talk to snakes because he lacks the piece of Voldemort`s soul. When the killing curse striked Daniel, it triggered Lily Potter`s protection and Harry got Voldemort`s soul. Some people are just plain unlucky.



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.05.07 - 06:00AM Title: Learning

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Interesting. While he still doesn't know she's lying to him, Tom has already started to implement his plan. Occlumency or not, I'm curious if Ginny would even have anything to set against the dark wizard's power.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a comment! Children like to play with fire, sometimes they get burned.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.05.07 - 01:37AM Title: Learning

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Interesting chapter.
I wonder how the Molly and Arthur are handling Ginny being in Slytherin whereas Harry was kicked out of the house immediately?

Author's Response: They are not willing to see their child as a Slytherin, she is merely being misguided by Potter. Concrete actions will follow.




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