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SIYE Time:2:42 on 28th May 2017

Reviews For A desire for power

Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.05.21 - 08:35AM Title: Battle

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Well, I don't see anything wrong with the two people Dumbledore doesn't trust bringing him Voldemort's diary after they painted the message about the Chamber on the wall, do you? 8-)



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.05.19 - 06:21AM Title: Battle

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It's a quite intriguing version of the battle in the Chamber of Secrets.
I was a wee bit surprised that two of them accepted their mind speaking ability so easily and without greater astonishment. I'm curious if they'll have even more abilities when the bond grows.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.18 - 08:23AM Title: Battle

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Ah, finally, the Bonding.
I've already read a couple of chambers scenes. This was a new version.
I'm curious about Dumbledore's reaction regarding the diary. And what will happen next? The term in not over yet.

Thank you so much for the update.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 03:46PM Title: Battle

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Yo, I was all synchronic with this chapter, lol.



Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 03:16PM Title: Battle

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The last part was so over the top that I almost puked!!! Your English could use a little help but that;s not too much of a problem! You were going quite good so far my dear author but did you really have to put in that much syrup?

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and leaving a reply! It`s honestly just getting worse from this point onwards. I am going to release all my pre written chapters as fast as I can and then I will take a break. I stopped liking the way Harry evolves and the overall plot. I am basically just trying to come up with a decent way to end it without it feeling too rushed. Did you find the chapter horrible for using the `Power of Love` trope or because of the general plot? I am still trying to improve, so I would appreciate any tips. Thank you in advance!




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