Reviews For James and Me
Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2019.03.27 - 08:42AM Title: Friendship
I am looking at the PMQ around Brexit and the only thing which comes to my mind is “Northumbrian is lucky, that Anna wrote about the European Convention on Human Rights not on the EU law, so he doesn't have to rewrite it now.” Hopelessly looking for at least some silver lining in this mess.
Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2019.03.11 - 11:24AM Title: Friendship
Just rereading “James and Me” for the fifth or sixth time (and marvelling again, how better written it is than 90% of all fanfiction I read in a long time; thank you!) and while reading this chapter I thought it would be fun to make something of the magical properties of the number seven. I guess, if I my dare to guess, seven was originally just because of magpies, but couldn't the resilience of two muggles (or how much they are muggles) against obliviation be result of that? Just a random idea.
Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 12:04PM Title: Cunning Plan
So excited when I saw an update! I've been missing your updates (on any story!).
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 01:10AM Title: Visitor
Lol. I missed this chapter. No wonder I am confused!
Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2018.02.25 - 09:14AM Title: Cunning Plan
What a fantastic part and an evil cliffhanger!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.02.25 - 08:19AM Title: Cunning Plan
I was disappointed at first when I saw the historical interlude continue in this chapter because I was in a hurry to return to James and Annie in the story's prevailing time stream. However, midway, you won me over. Introducing Umbridge is a stroke of genius! Love this chapter!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.02.25 - 07:51AM Title: Cunning Plan
I can't believe Dolores Umbridge was released from Azkaban! If ever anyone should be locked away permanently, she should. Poor Henry! What a disaster!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 07:23PM Title: Cunning Plan
Oh dear! My heart cannot stop beating so fast! And the next update will be ages! Real life do come first so I do understand. But......oh dear oh dear oh dear !
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 07:05PM Title: Mysterious Stranger
Ow I am confused. At this point, did Yannie andHecry know about the fact that they are friends with wizards and witches?
Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 02:13PM Title: Cunning Plan
I forgot to grade
Reviewer: SeekerDan Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 08:52AM Title: Cunning Plan
Firstly I must apologise for my lack of reviews on your recent work, it is unbelievably rude of me. But what a great addition to the story this chapter is! However I can't wait for more present day James and Annie and a bit of the wizarding lore surrounding the Robin Hood story! Keep it up!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 12:17AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
One of my favourite updates. I like the fact that Harry’s guilt and suspicions are highlihgted in equal measure.
Reviewer: fi103r Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 08:28PM Title: Cunning Plan
Ah another generation detests toad face and the feeling appears mutual this does not look good.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 08:12PM Title: Cunning Plan
Interesting. More bad guys in the picture. I really wasn't expecting her to show. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 07:10PM Title: Cunning Plan
It was easy to make sure Umbridge wasn't telling the truth. But they should be more cautious. Now Henry is stunned and I hope that the part in which he almost falls in Annie's dream isn't true. But the lava in her veins, she certainly suffered a cruciatus. Perhaps not this time, though.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 03:58PM Title: Cunning Plan
Been waiting for this (along with a couple of others). Hope you are well.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 03:43PM Title: Cunning Plan
I am enjoying this--and think I spotted a joke but am not sure. You referenced the Doctor being blond and Henry being a fan of blondes. I think that is a reference to the inexplicably blond "new" Doctor, Jodie Whitaker. Which if I am right, was very funny. If I am wrong, that's OK too.
Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 03:08PM Title: Cunning Plan
I. Loved. Every. Word. Of. It.
Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 12:00PM Title: Cunning Plan
Woo new James and Me! Great chapter. Though I would have thought Delores wouldn't feel the need to take on teenagers with help, but that's just me lol. Just curious, any update pending for Friends and Foes?
Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2018.02.12 - 05:32PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
I really like James & Me, I have read and re-read (and re-listened via TTS) this story many many times, but this chapter always feels wrong. I had hard time to figure out what's wrong with it, and I think I have finally some thought: there is just not enough plot in it. I could summarize this chapter in two sentences (and I think I am generous): Harry comes home, and Ginny tells him The Seven were in Drakeshaw. Harry is then worried kids broke International Statute of Secrecy. That is not enough stuff for whole chapter. You can add some fluff with Ginny fixing garden and some random facts spread through the chapter, but it still feels really thin.