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Reviews For James and Me

Reviewer: Rosina Ferguson Signed Date: 2017.05.19 - 08:39PM Title: Peverell?

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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 06:03AM Title: Peverell?

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I am rather enjoying the history and old language lessons James is providing. He is certainly knowledgeable and enthusiastic. Anna is understandably conflicted about him. I imagine her childhood growing up alongside the Potters was indeed somewhat magical as well as confusing (particularly if she was obliviated as much as I suspect she was).

Author's Response: I'm not sure why I chose this particular career path for James. In my view everyone to be enthusiastic about something (even if it's "merely" Harry Potter fanfiction). -N-



Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2017.05.13 - 01:32PM Title: Peverell?

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I'm really liking the edits. Knowing where the story goes the earlier chapters make a little more sense then they did. Not to say that they were bad before, far from it. I've enjoyed this story for years afterall. But The additions definitely tie things in a little better.

Author's Response: Thanks. I did a complete reread from the start, and found several things I wanted to change. Although most of the edits are minor (I'd been inconsistent between chapters with the contents of Annie's tea caddies - James' ex was either Kristen or Kirsten (note to self avoind names where two letters can be reversed and still be a name - because you can't spot the error)) some tighten up a few loose strings, -N-



Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2017.05.13 - 01:35AM Title: Peverell?

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really enjoying this, nice to get a flow on with so many chaps posted together. Interesting about James 'fighting' against Harry, so interested to read down the track how it affects his and Harry's relationship. Looking forward to seeing to seeing Annie interact with James' cousins and siblings again. Seems that Annie noticed quite a bit growing up with the Potter kids, might make it easier for her to accept when she learns about the wizarding world. Loving it, and wanting more!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This story is now on chapter 12, and thirteen is close to completion (mainly because unlike the others, it's very short. I'm not giving anything away by saying that chapter nine is called "Rose", and I've just submitted chapter 8. -N-



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.05.12 - 05:41PM Title: Peverell?

If annie is not careful she will be an item before she knows it. But for now james just got major brownie points....kutgw

Author's Response: True. -n-



Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.05.12 - 03:15PM Title: Peverell?

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I look forward to the moment Annie will catch up with the rest of the gang. For now it is good that they wait a bit before deepening their relationship too much. They both have to have good closure of their previous relationships and there is the secret about magic that ust be dealt with.

Author's Response: Thanks. Catching up with the rest of the gang? That will be chapter 12. As for the magic...
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