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Reviewer: StarFeather Signed Date: 2017.08.04 - 03:15AM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter. Marrietta is still an evil witch in your AU. Poor woman.
The scene , Harry remembered his parents or his grandparents, is beautifully written.
Confession time each other about Voldemort might be a little abrupt, but I understand it was needed for them to understand more deeply each other.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.06.22 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 4
It's wonderful to have Remus and Tonks together, and Teddy, of course.
Just a stupid question. Is Remus' name now Remus Tonks? Or is Auror Tonks actually Auror Lupin?
I really loved this chapter and the way the two of them shared what happened in their past. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hmm.. great question. I like to think that Tonks kept her last name, as did Remus, and that Teddy got a hyphen (Teddy Tonks-Lupin) because she is so proud of that Muggle last name.
Reviewer: Guest010 Signed Date: 2017.06.04 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter 4
Awww. Poor Ginny! But she showed Miss Bitch that she is made of stronger stuff :-D
I think I have seen this party scene in some movie, but can't remember which one. Ohh well.. Anyways loved that Harry and Ginny are coming close, and he is opening up to her :-) Wish the chapter was longer!
Author's Response: Thanks! In case you were wondering about what movie it was - its Legally Blonde, which is what inspired this entire tale! After this though we sort of stop seeing the similarities, so maybe I can lay claim to a little more as my own creativity?? (probably not) Sorry it was short, but I felt like it was a good end point for the chapter and I didn't want to add another scene at the end. More to come!
Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2017.06.04 - 01:51AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! It feels great to hear that! Putting up the next chapter now!
Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2017.06.04 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter. Cho and her friend need a good lesson. Harry and Ginny's relationship is progressing. I'm glad Harry was there and see her. Looking forward to see what happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.06.03 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 4
Yep, they really are a messed up pair. It will be interesting to see what happens next in their relationship.
Author's Response: Thanks! Like I said I really wasn't overjoyed with this chapter, but I do like the next one a lot more.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.06.03 - 05:02PM Title: Chapter 4
A bit short.
Author's Response: Would've written more if I could've written more.
