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Reviewer: rebeccahickshq Signed Date: 2017.06.05 - 09:53PM Title: Introductions and First Meetings (Molly's Point of View)

Well I sang the words and realized. It had all been said before. So I tried a different line that meant the same. But it didn't have the feeling. And the first one said much more. So I guess I'll have to say it once again. Thank you
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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 06:42AM Title: Introductions and First Meetings (Molly's Point of View)

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Interesting beginning. I admit I had to press through the first several paragraphs, but once the conversation at the Burrow began, I was easily drawn in to your story. I'm curious to see where it will go.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes the start was a bit of a challenge. It took many re-writes for my two little ones to be happy with it. But I do think it helps set a frame work for the rest of the story.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.05.15 - 02:48PM Title: Introductions and First Meetings (Molly's Point of View)

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Well written.

Author's Response: Thank you




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