Reviewer: ellen Signed
Date: 2017.05.22 - 04:44PM
Title: The Power of Love
Lighthearted fun, even if everyone in the Webb family seems to be some sort of superhero. Does Harry feature in the story at all?
Author's Response: Hi Ellen,
Thank you for your review.
I certainly hope that the new characters don't come across as 'superheroes', as I was aiming more for 'different'. But in the way they look at the world and how they apply their magic. Once the 'knowledge transfer' takes place between the different characters (both old and new) and the 'new tricks' are learnt, then the 'canon characters' will be displaying similar talents.
Certainly Harry and co will be a big part of the story, its mostly my fault at taking too long to introduce the new characters so far. But Harry and Ron certainly play large part in the story to come.
Some of the newer chapters I have just uploaded hopefully begin to show the knowledge transfer and the characters beginning to play more of a role.
BigIve
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2017.05.19 - 06:53PM
Title: The Power of Love
I'm enjoying this story! It is definitely unique to anything I have read previously. The characters are interesting and you have created a bit of mystery, or several, for readers to attempt to solve. I would suggest that you take the time to have it edited by someone. This story is very well written in many ways, but I have noticed numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and word usage which can be off putting to some readers. Just a suggestion!
Author's Response: Hi MollyandArthur,
Many thanks for your review. I'm very glad to hear that you are enjoying the story so far.
You are correct I do need 'another pair of eyes' to look over the story and have asked several people so far. Currently I have't had a response as yet. I just recently printed out the story and am reading it and editing it as I go myself. However being dyslexic spelling and grammar are a real challenge to me. That is part of the reason why I began to write down these stories that we have been making up and reading to our little boys. To give me an 'enjoyable challenge' so to speak.
I'm hoping to have an semi edited version to upload in the near future.
Once again thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
BigIve