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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2017.07.02 - 04:01AM Title: Chapter 4: August 31

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Good start. I hope to read more soon.



Reviewer: ColdFeetWarmHeart Signed Date: 2017.06.29 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter 4: August 31

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I love this chapter! Especially Harry's thoughts of Ginny at this point. I think it's a wonderful explanation as to why he didn't make more of an effort with her. I've always felt it a little strange that it took so long for them to get close, given all the time he spends with the Weasleys. To me this a very good explanation, and a brilliant foundation for a really good story!!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.06.29 - 06:59AM Title: Chapter 4: August 31

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Interesting chapter with a lot of erroneous and confused thinking on Harry's part. Of course, given his life experiences, I can well imagine him not understanding Ginny. Hopefully he will come to realize she is not a threat to him, although with the diary in her possession, she is unfortunately a threat to others. Looking forward to reading the next part!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.06.29 - 04:59AM Title: Chapter 4: August 31

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Poor Harry's drawing the wrong conclusions.
I'm curious what Minerva's planning to do with Harry, and how it'll affect his relationship with Ginny, i.e. the chances effect from the story title. I wonder if the two of them'll get the chance to talk a little with each other before the inevitable happens with Ginny.

Sadly, the chapter was bit short. But if you're keeping your update schedule, I'm perfectly fine with it. :)

Great chapter. Thank you so much.



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2017.06.29 - 12:46AM Title: Chapter 4: August 31

Poor Harry. If he only knew. Hoping Ginny is able to explain herself to him soon. That blasted diary. It would be a great twist if Ginny decided she didn't like it and gave it to someone else. One little suggestion. When there's a scene shift, like you have between Ginny in her room and Harry lying on the cot, it's best to put in some kind of break in between so the reader knows it's a scene shift.




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