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SIYE Time:19:49 on 19th October 2017


Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2017.07.20 - 03:37PM Title: In Which Harry Is Embarrassed Twice in One Day

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I can hear Harry's groan from hear lol!

Author's Response: Glad it was so vivid to you. Thanks!



Reviewer: Mysinger1 Signed Date: 2017.07.19 - 01:58AM Title: In Which Harry Is Embarrassed Twice in One Day

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Poor Harry! I feel sorry for Ginny as well, but at least she wasn't subjected to "the talk", following the loo incident. Very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought so. I thought about including what Molly said to Ginny, but ultimately decided not to do so. I'm sure she had already gotten "the talk" from Molly, so at least she was only embarrassed by the incident, not from an additional conversation as well. And, of course, Arthur had to make sure Harry didn't have any prurient motivation, embarrassing Harry further.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.07.18 - 09:46PM Title: In Which Harry Is Embarrassed Twice in One Day

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I think you captured the awkwardness of the moment well. As someone who had to share a bathroom with several siblings, you do learn to jump back into the shower. Arthur is such a great dad - it takes a special man to not only talk to all of his sons, but also other's sons. Very nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought so.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2017.07.16 - 10:18AM Title: In Which Harry Is Embarrassed Twice in One Day

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I can almost feel the heat on Harry's face from here.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you thought I conveyed Harry's embarrassment adequately.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.07.16 - 04:47AM Title: In Which Harry Is Embarrassed Twice in One Day

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Interesting theory. I always thought that the idea that wizarding society is so traditional regarding sex and marriage is an invention of fanfiction authors who write their stories for their grandchildren, lol.

Author's Response: It's a theory I've been playing around with. Given all the fanon ideas about marriage bonds and soul bonds, it seemed to fit in nicely.




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