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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2017.08.18 - 01:16AM Title: Fire & Rain

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The dream was a great way to integrate the Muggle aspect of Harry's persona. You made the older man very real by putting him in a position many people recognize from movies, books and real life experiences. Nice twist to the end of the dream... didn't see Voldemort coming or the fact that Harry fell out of bed while thrashing around. I like your cliffhanger, mostly because it's anticipatory rather than something to dread. I'm hoping the ritual will be successful. Please post again soon. This is a great story and I want to know more about it.

Author's Response: Thanks again - Jimmy's backstory is important, and I'm trying to integrate it a little at a time. The ritual outcome is in Ch 4, posted now.



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.08.10 - 07:21AM Title: Fire & Rain

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Intriguing concept. I take it that the Jimmy in the future still exists because it were just his memories travelling back in time. But then, the Jimmy in the future doesn't have his memories anymore, or was a duplicate of his memories sent back in time. On the other hand, Jimmy was killed by Voldemort in this chapter, before his memories travelled back in time. It's indeed an intriguing concept, and a mysterious, too. I’m looking forward to finding out more about this mystery.

Author's Response: Interesting ideas, yet the scene in this case is just a dream, combined from Jimmy's war experience and Harry's frequent nightmares. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.08.08 - 08:38AM Title: Fire & Rain

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Great Update.
It took me a moment to notice the time leap back to Tuesday. I'm quite curious about this part. Tom Riddle doesn't even corporally exist at this time but somehow he managed to kill this Jimmy bloke, at least it seemed as if he killed him. A dead Jimmy won't be able to read the books in his later life, even worse, he can't travel back to become Harry Potter. It’s quite a paradox, isn't it? I wonder what you're up to.

Author's Response: I threw some subtle clues in there, and you picked up on some of them, but the following scene he describes it as a dream; he's re-living parts of both sets of life experiences, if that makes sense. We get a glimpse of Jimmy's history mashed together with Harry's nightmares. Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.08.05 - 04:03PM Title: Fire & Rain

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Wow! A lot going on in this chapter. I feel that I need to go back and read it again. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!




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