Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 11:29AM Title: Chapter 5 Firewhisky
Hmmm, I had Anna's reaction to Malfoy's finger down to something more supernatural and sinister. Interesting bit of trickery, regardless.
And another fine chapter, even if I have nothing particularly helpful to add :)
I took the liberty of correcting a small glitch I spotted though (whereby Charlie's "mind had wondered").
Author's Response: Oops! Thank you so much for finding and correcting that error! As for Draco Malfoy, those Slytherin traits have to come out occasionally.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.08.28 - 09:33PM Title: Chapter 5 Firewhisky
Another great chapter! Don't think I like where Cissy is going with Anna! Suspect she now knows the link between Anna and Moldyshorts! Glad Charlie is back in the picture -- maybe just in time! Can't wait for the next one!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.08.28 - 08:59AM Title: Chapter 5 Firewhisky
Thank you so much for another great chapter. It seems that we'll soon witness some less pleasant events. Now that everyone had a couple of drinks, I hope the twins can prise a few more personal secrets out of the youngsters.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.08.26 - 07:38PM Title: Chapter 5 Firewhisky
There's trouble ahead for sure! This was a good chapter but I felt the parts about the kids were only separating the other sections. They're not bad but they seem far less relevant than the rest.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.08.26 - 09:15AM Title: Chapter 5 Firewhisky
I'm afraid it's a mistake to hide their doubts from Anna. She would be unsuspecting, in case Malfoy plans to lay hand on her again when she's back at Hogwarts. Too bad the Paternity Potion didnít reveal that D.L. isn't a pure-blood. I just hope D.L. soon finds out that Mrs. Malfoy is prying about his personal matters.