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Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.09.13 - 10:46AM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams and Letters

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Anna is slowly becoming the centre of the attention of the male part of the Hogwarts students. Even Harry tries to spend part of his free time with her. I just hope Anna isn't running into problems for spending time alone with Harry, even if she's just teaching him Occlumency. The gossip mill is merciless. Neville won't like it, whereas the two betrothal applicants certainly won't like it.
Great update, thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Anna is definitely receiving some unwanted attention. Fortunately, between the Room of Requirement, Harry's invisibility cloak and the Marauder's map, they should be able to meet discretely!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams and Letters

ALMOST FORGOT! ::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you!!!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 03:24PM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams and Letters

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Good Grief Charlie Brown! Or in this case, Charlie Weasley, who better get a move on courting Anna! Two letters of interest in betrothal
with Anna - from a couple of twerps! Glad to see Neville take control in protecting his cousin! Interesting exchange between Anna and Harry too! Can't wait to see where this goes next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review, and for making me laugh!!! You are certainly correct about Charlie needing to get a move on. Of course he needs to be clued in first. I'm glad you like a strong, protective Neville. He is a bit of a favorite of mine!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 07:36AM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams and Letters

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Poor Anna is almost betrothed because of some ancient customs. Poor Ginny is still struggling to be noticed. I don't have the impression that Harry will ask her out anytime soon. At the moment he seems to be closer to Anna.
Thank you so much fro another fine update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I quite agree with you. Harry is close to Anna in the same way he is close to Hermione. Maybe he needs a bit more time and a little push in the right direction when it comes to Ginny!



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 07:18PM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams and Letters

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This was great from start to finish. It's nice to have more Anna around.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!




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