SIYE Time:16:06 on 19th October 2017

Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.09.21 - 07:29AM Title: Chapter 8 Decisions


To be honest, I'm still not sure what to make of a relationship between Charlie and Anna. Don't get me wrong, I really wouldn't mind. It's certainly much more agreeable than Anna's other options. OK, I'm not sure about Ernie because I don't know that much about him. Age difference aside, I'll be quite curious, however, what Anna will do when she has to choose between Macmillan manor and the hut of a dragon keeper. She is accustomed to a certain prosperity, isn't she? That is, if she'll be included in the decision at all.

Thank you so much for another fine update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review and your honest reaction! For obvious reasons I won't say too much, but Anna is not completely powerless, nor is she without financial resources. Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.09.18 - 03:03PM Title: Chapter 8 Decisions


As Slughorn would say, OH HO HO! Great chapter! And the plot thickeneth! Glad to see Charlie acting so quickly after Bill gave him the 411 on Anna! Hope he isn't too late! The bit between Lucius and Narcissa triggered my gag reflex! Nice to see Dumbledore and Snape on the same page about Umbitch! Hope Charlie beats Dorko to the punch! And a punch just might be what comes Dorko's way if he trys to romance Anna! Only question is wi1l it come from Neville, Charlie or Anna herself? Can hardley wait for the next chapter to see if Charlie gets to his love in time and to hopefully see Dorko get slapped silly!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! You have a talent for always making me laugh. Sorry about triggering the gag reflex. I quite understand that reaction when it comes to the Malfoys. Charlie certainly won't be wasting time, although smooth sailing ahead is not a typical occurrence in the world of Harry Potter. As for Dorko, well I'll leave that to your marvelous imagination for now!

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.09.17 - 03:03AM Title: Chapter 8 Decisions


I absolutely love this story! I love how you're weaving your own story into JKR's. I'm intrigued about Anna and Charlie. I know you've hinted at it, and I look forward to seeing the reaction to his betrothal contract (next chapter?)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You will definitely see more about betrothal contracts soon, as well as other developments. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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