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SIYE Time:16:06 on 19th October 2017

Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.09.27 - 07:13AM Title: Chapter 9 Witch's Choice

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I'm really curious how it's going on with Anna and Charlie. Will she really agree and one day move from her opulent manor to a rather inadequate hut in the Dragon Reserve in the Welsh mountains? As much as I'd be happy for Charlie, it would be a bit unusual, wouldn't it? I suspect there're still hidden mysteries connecting Anna and Charlie. Charlie's dreams certainly didn't come out of nowhere. However, somehow I've the feeling the Malfoys will take revenge, in case Anna prefers a Weasley to a Malfoy.

I'm glad Harry didnít have to kiss one of the twins, lol. And I'm even happier that Ginny got her first kiss from Harry. Was it the breakthrough for her? Somehow I doubt it.

I had to smile about Arthur and Molly when they tried to convey the impression that they know exactly what their children are doing. I hope they will be able to keep this illusion for a long time because such an illusion has a soothing effect.

Great Chapter. Thank you so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! You have a curious habit of making a comment that occasionally makes me wonder if you can read my mind, or have magically "seen" a bit of the next chapter. I honestly don't know what to make of it! I'm glad you enjoyed the pairings for the first bit of the spin the bottle game. It was great fun to write and I needed a bit of levity! As for Arthur and Molly, I think most parents would like to believe they are on top of things. Whether that is true or not is an entirely different matter!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.09.25 - 03:23PM Title: Chapter 9 Witch's Choice

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Well this chapter was a real beaut!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing at Anna's five fingered description of Dorko to Ginny - I think she showed real class not using her middle finger for the last one! Wouldn't put it past the Malfunction family to try something underhanded tho! She didn't seem to be too impressed with Ernie either! So Glad Arthur and Molly agreed to help Charlie out - he has thought it out well and I think he and Anna would be good together! Hope he doesn't have to come to her rescue but he would! The spin the bottle game was a real hoot too! I have fond memories of playing that game when I was younger, especially since that's how my wife and I shared our first kiss! Can't wait for the next installment! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed Anna's critique of Dorko. It was amazingly easy to come up with five reasons to not like him. Rather sad, really. I love your comment about you and your wife sharing your fist kiss during a game of spin the bottle. It is one of those right of passage games that teenagers used to play. I'm not sure what they do now. Regardless, I am raising a glass of wine in honor of you both!!!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.09.25 - 11:33AM Title: Chapter 9 Witch's Choice

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Oh what a marvellous chapter this is! I think poor Molly nearly had a heart attack there!
I loved the game of spin the bottle - yay to Harry/Ginny, and I had to laugh at Gred and Forge with their "turn their backs and hum", how very mature of them for once. I look forward to seeing the fallout from that kiss next chapter, and hopefully Anna's reaction to Charlie's betrothal contract. :)

Unfortunately there was two things that disappointed me greatly about this chapter - I didn't want it to end, and I have to wait another week for the next instalment! Love this story :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I love writing Gred and Forge even though it takes three or more rewrites to make it through each scene with them. They are just such fun characters! Glad you're enjoying this story!




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