Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.12.10 - 10:53AM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
Interesting retelling of the OotP pre-crisis action.
The base strength of your story is its novel perspective -- basically sticking to 90-95% canonical plot, but through a very different set of eyes and ears and a somewhat distinct set of issues. This can be a great recipe for experiencing everything anew, but only as long as the authour is disciplined enough to stick to the unique perspective -- not always easy given the tempting crystal ball of canonical foreknowledge...
But you're definitely pulling it off. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! As time goes on in this story, I will be following canon less which is both exciting and frightening!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.10.12 - 05:26AM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
Yikes, I'd completely overlooked that I'd already left a review for this chapter, lol. It must have something to do with my advanced age...
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.10.12 - 04:36AM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
It's a pity that Ginny didn't kick his shin, when Harry reacted so grumpily on her offer to help.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.10.10 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
Cheers for another interesting chapter! Dorko sure never hesitates to show what a total jerk he is! Good for Harry on his magic improvement - must really be good if he impressed Ol Greasehead! Interesting about Harry and Anna's lessons and her being an Occlumens. Hermoine needs to give it a rest - not everyone is an academic ace! Hope you work in Charlie to rescue Anna soon (Charlie was also the only Weasley not to appear in the movies) ! I swear Umbitch makes you wish that when the Centaurs took her into the forest(my favorite scene in OTP) that they hadn't brought her back! Can't wait for the next one!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.10.09 - 04:32AM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
I can't help but hope Malfoy is trying to do something indecent to Anna, to give her the opportunity to hex him into the next century, without a return ticket.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.10.08 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 11 O.W.L.s
Good chapter, but where's my Charlie??? If Anna decides she doesn't want to marry him I will gladly...feel free to send him my way! :)