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SIYE Time:9:37 on 20th June 2018

Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 10:16PM Title: Chapter 13 Department of Mysteries

I hope Pomfrey tells Augusta what Draco did to Anna, That's one way to toss the betrothal offer back in the Malfoy's faces!!

Thank you for not killing Sirius!!!! Most other authors usually follow what JK wrote and kill him!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Pomfrey will definitely explain Anna's full medical situation to Augusta. I wrote Anna's plea for secrecy because many girls (and women) don't want to admit such an event ever occurred, particularly right after it happened. I'm glad you approve of Sirius being alive. He is a wonderful character!!!



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.12.24 - 11:15AM Title: Chapter 13 Department of Mysteries

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Lucky Chapter 13 -- the first major divergence from canon! A Harry who does not trash the Headmaster's office, a living Sirius, and (possibly) a loaded Molly-missile? Interesting choices; good choices; wonder-what-happens-next choices!

I believe I already wished you and your 'Arthur' the happiest of holidays, but this is another day and a new page. My thoughts are with you both!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you approve of the changes from canon. This story is rather AU from this point on. I hope you have a very happy holiday season!!!



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.10.24 - 09:10PM Title: Chapter 13 Department of Mysteries

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That was an interesting twist with Sirius. I wonder what it will do to Ginny and Harry's future interaction.

I'm glad you did not spend too much time on the parts that did not change from canon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I need Sirius in this story!!! Also, it always upset me that JKR killed him the way she did after the tragic life he led (horrid childhood, a dozen years in prison for a crime he didn't commit, then falling into the 'veil of death' so to speak). I know I'm not the only fan who was crying, or raging, by the end of book 5!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.10.23 - 08:20AM Title: Chapter 13 Department of Mysteries

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Thank you so much for the action-packed chapter.

I'm glad Sirius survived the rescue mission. Letís hope it'll help Harry to have a carefree summer. On the other hand, he'll probably be grumpy all summer because he feels responsible for his friends' injuries. He always finds a reason to be moody, doesn't he? I've given up the hope that Ginny will cheer him up anytime soon.

Very probably, however, Anna's betrothal negotiations will overshadow Harry's moods coming summer. I guess Ol' Lucius appearance in the ministry will be the ultimate reason to decline Malfoy's betrothal request. Hopefully, he'll be rewarded with a nice, long stay in Azkaban.


Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you are comfortable with Sirius's survival. This story is going a bit more AU from this point on, so the situation with Sirius and Harry is about to change. I can promise you that Harry will not be having a typical summer at all!!!! As for Anna's betrothal, Augusta will make sure it is settled over the summer as promised to all of the families involved. Ol' Lucius is exactly where he belongs (for the moment), and more about the Malfoy family in later chapters!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.10.22 - 07:59PM Title: Chapter 13 Department of Mysteries

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Holy lit firecracker Batman what an exciting chapter this was! Great action but hate that everyone but Harry ended up in the hospital wing! Glad they are okay! Only disappointment was that Dorko didn't end up in Azkaban or hanging by his family jewels from the astronomy tower for what he did to Anna! Wonder if the red marks Molly saw on Anna's wrist have something to do with the secret spells she's been doing and is Madame Pomfrey aware of them?! Really Enjoyed your take on the department of mysteries battle, especially since Sirius survived! Can't wait for the next thrilling installment! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you found this chapter exciting! Arnel quite correctly told me to rewrite part of it, so I'm pleased the final edit worked. The next chapter will offer more info about Dorko, though I'm afraid you will be disappointed that he is not hanging from the tower by his family jewels (though I agree it really is an excellent idea!!!). Sirius will have a rather active role as this story goes increasingly AU. I hope you continue to enjoy it!!!




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