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SIYE Time:19:28 on 19th November 2017

Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.10.30 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter 14 Confessions

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Thank you so much for another great chapter.
It would be great if Sirius would be cleared, not only for Harry.

Well, that's Malfoy as he lives and breathes. For me, he's the worst character in JKR's universe, cowardly and malicious. I hope that Malfoy will become addicted to alcohol in the never ending winter nights of Finland, booze himself to dead to salvage the world from his presence. However, somehow I doubt my wishes will become true.

Is Narcissa right, would the Dark Lord really care about his granddaughter if he finds out about her? Somehow I doubt it, but I wouldn't be surprised if I'm wrong. On the other hand, maybe he'll never find out about Anna. I suppose we'll see ... eventually.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I must agree that Malfoy is a thoroughly unlikable character in JKR's world. She wrote him in such a way that he truly seems to lack redeeming qualities of any kind. You raise an interesting question about Narcissa's concern regarding Tom Riddle learning the truth about his granddaughter. She believes he would care and has therefore chosen to flee with Draco. Whether he would actually care and why he might care are an entirely different matter!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.10.30 - 10:52AM Title: Chapter 14 Confessions

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I cannot but help feel Draco deserves something more. Charley could chuck him to the dragons.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I love your idea about Charlie giving Draco to the dragons (might give them indigestion though).



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 09:24PM Title: Chapter 14 Confessions

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Oh this one was interesting! Nice to know everyone, especially Anna, are OK! Hate that she didn't press charges against Dorko and I wish she'd gotten a chance to use that knife and turn him into a eunuch! I'd imagine he's catching it from his mom in Finland for screwing up all their plans! Narcissa is obviously afraid of Moldyshorts and she should be! Something tells me Dorko won't stay away from Hogwarts and if he doesn't I hope he runs into Neville first thing(or Charlie if he ever hooks up with Anna)! Also glad to see Harry's friends supporting him which he needs now that he knows the prophecy! As usual I can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I completely understand and agree with your sentiments about Dorko. I can easily imagine his mother screaming rather shrilly at him for some time to come! Harry does indeed have wonderful and supportive friends! In my mind, Hermione would initially be disapproving, but she always comes through for Harry, so I think she would move on in protective big sister fashion fairly quickly. More on Charlie soon...



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter 14 Confessions

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Great read again! I think I like where this is going. I do hope we have not seen the last of Draco though. I mean, he has some suffering to do still...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Draco will be scarce for a while, and I agree about the suffering! We have not seen the last of him.




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