Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.01.20 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
Another fine chapter! A very minor point, if I might, is that in the sentence, "Anna was pouring over one of the esoteric..." I'm fairly certain you want 'poring'. The former tends to attract silly puns, none of which I will encourage here. :)
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2017.12.01 - 12:28AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
I really enjoyed this chapter, but am yet again left waiting for more! Thank you for writing such an enchanting story.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 04:04AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
Yay, Harry finally found some of that Gryffindor courage and kissed Ginny! Well done to Sirius to for giving him the nudge.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.11.27 - 06:35AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
Dancing school ... that quite certainly was a fascinating time, with a lot of funny incidents...unfortunately it's been almost half a century ago.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2017.11.27 - 12:53AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
Good chapter. Finally Harry and Ginny get together. The one thing that JKR never touched on was the reaction of the other Wesley's about their relationship. Are you?
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.11.26 - 07:55PM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons
Zip-a-dee-doo-dah, zip-a-dee-ay My, oh, my, what a wonderful day! A brand new chapter has come my way, zip-a-dee-doo-dah zip-a-dee-ay! And what a brilliant chapter it is! First a passionate kiss between Harry and GInny and then he has the kahoonas to ask her to be his girlfriend - kudos to Sirius "Dr. Love" Black for his spot on advice to Harry)! Ron still has lousy timing! And another horcrux bites the dust (kind of like it was Sirius weildng the sword instead of Ron)! Especially glad Anna wants to have Charlie over to the manor for tea and a walk in the garden! Maybe she understood those amortentia smells after all! ! BTW, you might consider having a contest to see who comes up with the best idea for Dorko's unfortunate accident(wink wink)! Can't wait for the next one!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D