Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.02.03 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter 20 Power
Commending you on a balanced, plausible and analytical view of the bond! I will confess to having an instinctive tendency to cringe at the mention of 'S.B.', since it always seems to be the ironic antithesis of romance -- a little like turning love into a disease. However, in this case, you render it as a secondary facet to what is otherwise a normal, nascent relationship. It lies somewhere between a challenge and a blessing, but does not alter much about the fact of two young(ish) people beginning to discover each other. And that, of course, sounds like the makings of a romance :) I'm dropping you a separate PM with a stylistic comment that need not clutter up this space. Good job, as always! Author's Response: Thank you so much! Unfortunately, I was unable to open the PM beyond seeing the subject. Technology is certainly fussy sometimes :) Perhaps you can e-mail me if you have the time.... Regarding the S.B. I quite agree that sometimes the concept feels a bit disturbing and occasionally seems to remove consent. In this case it is supposed to be mostly about magical power melding and strengthening. Somewhere between a challenge and a blessing is a reasonable way to consider the relationship I am trying to explain, so I am happy to see your comment regarding it as such ;) Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.12.11 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 20 Power Wow! What a special early Christmas gift this was! HO HO HO! I knew it had to be a bond and boy am I glad I was right! Charlie and Anna are bonded and their love for each other is evident! The betrothal is imminent and they are clearly very happy together! No surprise that Bill and Fleur bonded as well! (Harry and Ginny on deck!) Would love to see the look on that twerp Dorko and his mum's faces when they find out! Wonder what kind of wrench they'll try to throw into the works?! Really can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.12.11 - 01:56PM Title: Chapter 20 Power Wow! What a special early Christmas gift this was! HO HO HO! I knew it had to be a bond and boy am I glad I was right! Charlie and Anna are bonded and their love for each other is evident! The betrothal is imminent and they are clearly very happy together! No surprise that Bill and Fleur bonded as well! (Harry and Ginny on deck!) Would love to see the look on that twerp Dorko and his mum's faces when they find out! Wonder what kind of wrench they'll try to throw into the works?! Really can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.12.11 - 08:37AM Title: Chapter 20 Power Intriguing explanations regarding the magical bound, or is it already save to call it a soul bond? I wonder if it's really a Weasley thing, or what else could have been the trigger. Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2017.12.10 - 06:48PM Title: Chapter 20 Power I'm curious if this will happen to Harry and Ginny. I'm glad you nixed the soul bond I never really like that they share minds Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2017.12.10 - 10:53AM Title: Chapter 20 Power This is one of my very favorite stories. The pairing of Anna and Charlie is wonderful, as is the sibling relationship of Anna and Neville. It is one of the stories I am happiest to see updates of. | |||||||
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