SIYE Time:18:50 on 25th June 2019

Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.02.10 - 09:37AM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans


A very sweet interlude!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.12.19 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans


It is always good to know that there is someone who manages things for you and tells you what to do. It makes life so easy. In short, good that there's Dumbledore, lol.

Regarding Harry and Ginny, well, it proves again that the boys are the true romantics, and the girls are only after one thing, aren't they? ;-)

I'm more and more curious about the meaning of the bond in the further story ... and if it's even allowed to have a professor betrothed to a student at Hogwarts. (As always, no spoilers please).

Thank you so much for another intriguing chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, I suppose Dumbledore is rather helpful in his management of everyone. I never really considered it that way, but you do make an interesting point. Loved your comment about boys and girls! Ginny knows what she wants and is not shy about it. As for the bond, I will simply say it is important and leave it at that. A professor betrothed to a student is probably not a frequent occurrence, but I cannot imagine in the long history of Hogwarts that it has never happened previously. Thank you so much for a lovely review!

Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.12.18 - 09:29AM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans


No Review

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2017.12.18 - 01:51AM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans

Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.12.17 - 09:52PM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans


A cute and light chapter :) I'm glad you're not making the bond thing too cheesy or even too present. While it can be fun, I've read my fair share of those stories.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm pleased you like the way I've written the bonds so far.

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.12.17 - 03:15PM Title: Chapter 21 Making Plans


Can't think of a better way to mark one week til Christmas Eve than with a new chapter of this stupendous story! That Albus Dumbledore is a cunning and sneaky fellow, not to mention a master manipulator! So Professor Charlie, eh! Gee, wonder if Charlie will go for that since he would be close to Anna?! I'd bet the castle on it! Sweet kissing scenes between our couples Harry and Ginny(Sirius's timing is as bad as Ron's) and Charlie and Anna! Would love to see the look on Dorko and his mommy's faces when they find out about the betrothal between Anna and Charlie! Why do I get the feeling that Dorko may come back to Hogwarts from Finland and then "accidently" run into Charlie! Hope you have a blessed and very Happy Christmas! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! My opinion of Dumbledore definitely matches yours, and I guarantee he is as conniving in this story as always. Glad you like the idea of Professor Charlie! Sirius did indeed have rather poor timing, but at least Harry and Ginny enjoyed a brief stolen moment. I can also easily imagine him being discrete since I don't think he was a particularly innocent teenager! I hope you enjoy a very Happy Christmas as well!!!

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