Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.02.27 - 09:44PM Title: Chapter 24 Curfew and Compromise
Very interesting hints about the strength of the bond. I admit much curiosity about the 'nature' of the bond and the reason it exists (and is so strong). All fine motivation to read on!
Your Charlie characterization continues to be one of the boldest and most intriguing aspects of this story. Once again, I find reasons to be curious in looking ahead to the pseudocanonical events to take place in the future. I rather suspect he will have a role more complex in your telling than, say, knocking down walls in anger.
Curiouser and curiouser. Well done!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you are curious about this story and feel motivated to continue reading! Charlie has been a fun character to write. As one of the known 'good guys' who was barely utilized by JKR, I have felt free in his characterization. Your descriptions of bold and complex are apt, though he may well be involved in knocking down walls as well ;) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter 24 Curfew and Compromise
I just caught up with the story again and I really enjoyed it. I couldn't help but notice that the girls have developed from wallflowers to young women.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.01.08 - 08:48AM Title: Chapter 24 Curfew and Compromise
After living most of the time almost like a wallflower, Ginny nicely flourishes since she's together with Harry. I really like it. I was a wee bit surprised, however, that Luna didn't ask for permission to watch and investigate certain intimate activities next time, to publish the results in the Quibbler, preferable with photographs of the involved persons, lol.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 24 Curfew and Compromise
You made my Sunday night with this new chapter! Isn't Ginny the little sneak listening to the guys with extendable ears?! Ernie was a very gallant loser but that character has always struck me as being a bit stuck up! Got to love Luna and her unique quirkiness, but she sure tells it like it is! Glad Anna gave Charlie a pass on his "accidental" meeting with Dorko! Especially since he managed to be a gentleman in the face of such beautiful temptation! Charlie and Anna are definitely a hot couple! Can't help but wonder how long he had to swim in that cold lake?! Nice job of bringing the horcruxes into the mix! Can't wait for the next one and Happy 2018! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 05:15PM Title: Chapter 24 Curfew and Compromise
Marvellous chapter, really enjoyed it. It was nice to see an insight into what Charlie and Anna's relationship is like. Even though my situation was slightly different to Anna's I completely understand how bad memories can arise in certain situations of lines of thoughts, and how damn awkward it can be.