Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.03.11 - 08:42PM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
And again a surprise -- well done! Of course I should have known that you would lull me into false complacency :)
You may have painted yourself into a challenging corner in terms of Harry, what with him still likely having elements of his canonical impulsiveness, him having a powerful love interest in real danger and, yet, there being adults in close vicinity who are actually capable (a bit supra-canonically) of acting as adults.
In any case, it's a situation that poses some creative dilemmas but fortunately, this is your story, and I'm only along for the ride :)
Author's Response: I'm glad to be able to keep surprising you! You're quite correct about Harry of course. Sitting something out is definitely not something that happened much in canon, but I wish it was. While I know JKR wrote her books for youth/teens/young adults, the idea of the adults being increasingly inadequate as the years went on was always hard for me. Perhaps I'm showing my age and showing that I read all of them as a 'youngish' adult ;) Thank you so much for this review!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.29 - 09:21AM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
You are forgiven for the cliffy! Incidentally, with me it'd be a glass of Austrailian Shirraz wine! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 09:41PM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
Oh you dirty, no good(BLEEPED)! What a gut-wrenching cliffy to leave us with! I knew when the girls left without the guys something bad was going to happen! I had sensed a dark turn coming in this thing! for the last 2 chapters I just hope something even worse happens to those deathknibblers that took them! I just hope Charlie and Remus catch up with them quickly since the goons don't know about the bond between Charlie and Anna! But then Anna and Ginny might happen to them first! How am I gonna be able to relax until the next chapter!? Please don't leave us hanging very long! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
Aside from the bad-things-happen-in-Hogsmeade cliché, that was a pretty good chapter with a suitably dramatic ending.
Reviewer: HPforlife Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 08:10PM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
OMG!!! I love your story!! I've been following your story for so long, and every time you update I get so happy! I am so curious about what happened to the girls?!? Can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: maisa potter Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 12:58PM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
An awful cliffhanger!! I need to keep reading! Please update soon, and keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 10:30AM Title: Chapter 27 Hogsmeade
Oh, I already had a bad feeling when the girls left the broomsticks alone. Okay, to be honest, I already had that bad feeling when I read the title of the chapter. Now we know why Voldemort summoned Bella and Dolohov two chapters ago. I'm curious about Voldemort's intentions with Anna. Let's hope that Charlie ability to sense Anna won't fail. I've never hoped so much for a quick update so much.