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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.03.31 - 12:27PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

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Congratulations on the latest award and recognitions! I'd say you've cultivated quite a following!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm truly amazed by the awards this story has received. Humbling to put it mildly.



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.02.21 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

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Great update!
With each chapter, the good story is even getting better and better. The deviations from the well-known events are certainly a major reason because the story is well-written right from the beginning.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.02.20 - 10:56PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

Man. That was an intense but great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.19 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

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Certainly a near X-rating there at the end but what a beautiful first time for Anna and Charlie! She's one lady who knew what she wanted and didn't give Charlie a choice - not that he wanted one! ;) Good to see both Ron and Harry pulled their heads out at the same time and asked their ladies to the dance! Harry and Ginny are growing closer together - bond time may be close if it already didn't happen in the chamber!(which I've always felt was likely) Harry sure got it right calling Twiddle twisted! Clever move getting the Hufflepuff cup from the Lestrange vault! SIrius finally found a good use for the Black family name! Nice sword work by Remus destroying the cup! Just hope this chapter wasn't the calm before the storm! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I suppose I did push the R rating slightly, but if I take over a thousand words to describe a violent confrontation in detail, I think I should afford a loving interaction the same courtesy ;) The boys did do an excellent job quickly securing their dates for the Yule Ball (they are both older and wiser than the first go around!) . I can promise it will be a night to remember (that was actually the theme of my senior prom -a bit cliche I know). I've always wondered about the Chamber myself with regards to a bond developing between Harry and Ginny. JKR never seemed to allude to anything, but he did save her life and almost died in the process. Glad you liked the way I handled Hufflepuff's cup! I kind of feel bad about the Gringotts Dragon still being locked up though.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.02.19 - 01:18PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

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Good to know that Ron's learning from old mistakes.
And it's good to see Ginny teaching Harry some wisdom about guilt. Let's hope he'll remember well.

Ah, Anna finally succeeded, and Charlie ran out of excuses. I wonder how it'll affect their Bond.

Thank you so much for another great chapter. I really enjoyed reading two chapters at once.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, Ron is learning; Ginny is wonderful for at least attempting to teach Harry that the weight of the world is not always on his shoulders; and I simply couldn't wait any longer for Charlie and Anna to further their relationship ;)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.02.19 - 12:25PM Title: Chapter 30 The Ones You Love

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Oh I've got to love Ron for finally at last pulling his head out of his arse and learning from past mistakes! :)
Oh and that was a very cunning way to get the cup from Gringott's, I like it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you liked the bit with the cup. My thought was that when people are in Azkaban or wanted criminals, there must be some procedure for family members to access Gringotts vaults. As for Ron, I would like to think he learns from his mistakes :)




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