Reviews For Darkness Within II
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.04.07 - 04:13PM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
I'm back! Back to say, more clearly, that I actually did think it was a great chapter!
My earlier review was actually intended as a positive one too, but used so much negative language that it might have raised eyebrows. I attribute that to a bad attitude associated with hacking cough and fever. Excuses excuses.
Author's Response: No worries!!! I actually thought your previous review was lovely and accurate about cliff hangers. I hope your hacking cough and fever go away soon. My husband has been in bed all weekend with the same thing. Not fun :(
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.04.07 - 02:09PM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
Ah! Now here's a great example of the unfairly maligned 'cliff hanger'. Used judiciously, it's a great literary device.
Given how much I harp in immersion, I can't fault a great sequence like that for pulling a reader deep into the thick of things and (semi-figuratively) beating him or her over the head with blunt anticipation :)
Normally, I would race ahead to the next chapter but, for all the times I've been on the doling end of such experiences, I will use this as payback.
All that aside, a fine chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I completely understand the love/hate relationship when it comes to cliff hangers ;) I've tried to find the balance and have one occasionally without leaving readers hanging all the time. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.03.13 - 06:23AM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
Wow, quite the cliffhanger there! Can’t wait to see where that goes.
Reviewer: maisa potter Signed Date: 2018.03.12 - 04:43PM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
Cliffhanger!! I need the next chapter!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.03.12 - 02:06PM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
Holy moley! This chapter was sure worth the wait (I was starting to worry about you)! What a wickedly perfect cliffhanger at the end! You have to admit that Cissy really thought things through when it came to protecting her family! She just forgot Sirius knew her well enough to insist on the special oath to keep her honest! You can't trust a Malflunky any further than you can spit them! Nice to see another horcrux bite the dust and it was interesting to see how it affected Charlie's bond with Anna when he whacked it! A premonition perhaps? The scene with the guys waiting for the girls for the ball was a hoot! Speaking of that wicked cliffy, I have a sneaking suspicion that what occured between Harry and Ginny was their love bringing their bond to fruition & the end of the horcrux within Harry as a result! Cannot wait for the next one to find out! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.03.12 - 08:38AM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
When I read this chapter, so many questions were running through my mind.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.03.12 - 01:55AM Title: Chapter 32 For a Price
Love always kills hate. Great chapter