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Reviews For Darkness Within II

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.05.12 - 07:36PM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

PUT THE WORD OUT!! I'VE SEEN A PREVIEW FOR THE NEW FANTASTIC BEASTS "THE CRIMES OF GELLERT GRINDLEWALD"MOVIE COMING OUT IN DECEMBER! ALL THE CHARACTERS FROM THE FIRST ONE APPEAR TO BE IN IT AND JOHNNY DEPP PLAYS GRINDLEWALD AND THERE IS A NEW CHARACTER PLAYED BY JUDE LAW.....NONE OTHER THAN A YOUNGER ALBUS DUMBLEDORE!! LOOKS TERRIFIC AND I CAN'T WAIT! AUROROFTHELIGHT

Author's Response: Wow!!! Definitely exciting! I'm looking forward to it!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.05.06 - 09:37AM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

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Even though Anna is not pregnant, I was just wondering what Tommy Boy would do when he learns that he has become a great-grandfather.

Oh, oh, "He (Dobby) won’t be in any danger.”...somehow I've got the feeling that Dobby won't survive...
Ron should inform someone about his plan so that he won't be accidentally attacked by his own friends because they're clueless.

Regarding Game of Thrones, we also watched the series between Christmas and New Years, but only season 5-7. So I'm eager to read your version of a dragon attack!

Great update. Thank you so much!

Author's Response: I would hate to think what Tommy Boy would think - most loyal future Death Eater ever perhaps - if properly raised and groomed. Shuddering... too disturbed to write such a story line, though now you're making me contemplate it! I will admit that I am not a fan of Cursed Child. I'm actually trying to forget I ever read it and block it from my mind entirely. Yep, Ron's plans are certainly dangerous for all involved, though a necessity really. As far as Game of Thrones is concerned, I'm somewhat nervous about what to expect from the next season. Thank you so much for this review :)



Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.05.05 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

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I'm with Harry on being alarmed at how quickly Ginny can be drained.

Hmm, is Anna going to have an actual pregnancy scare (or actual pregnancy) at some point during this story?

Ron's confidence seems a bit optimistic.

Author's Response: Yes, Harry should be concerned. I'm hoping I managed to convey my thoughts on how potentially dangerous it could be for one person to draw magic from another. With regard to Anna, I can promise she will not become a teen parent. They definitely have enough to handle right now ;) Thank you so much for your review!



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.05.05 - 05:43AM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

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Fascinating, unique plot developments! Won't comment on them here, though, in case people are skimming the reviews before reading.

"he didn’t understand that wizards generally could not feel magic in others" -- interesting twist on explaining something that Rowling hinted at (that Harry had an element of the aura perception that Luna had) but never tried to rationalise. Numerous FF writers have run with the ability, yet I don't recall a plausible attempt to address cause.

"They can smell fear and use it against you if you let them." -- spoken like an experienced educator?

Anyway, cool chapter. Concise, well written.

Sincere wishes for you with things at home!




Author's Response: Thank you very much! Rowling gave us so many interesting little hints about Harry's magical abilities. Harry himself of course was always modest - that 'I'm just Harry' attitude, but others occasionally perceived and commented upon his unusual magic and power, especially for one so young. I'm not generally a fan of the 'super-Harry' type of stories; however, I suspect Harry is capable of more than the average wizard - perhaps due to a combination of natural ability and a lack of perceived limitations. Harry's ability to drive off the swarm of Dementors at the end of PoA at the age of 13 is a prime example, as is his Side-along Apparition of Dumbledore at the end of Half-Blood Prince at the age of 16. As for smelling fear, you are absolutely correct ;) Actually it was a 10 year old boy in my first year of teaching (almost twenty years ago) who introduced me to the Harry Potter stories. My student wanted to write a report about the first book for extra credit. Naturally I needed to read the book myself in order to be able to accurately grade his report. It was brilliant, of course!!!



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2018.05.04 - 03:04AM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.05.03 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter 36 Preparations

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Wonderful to see a new chapter! With all those vibrations going on it would have been apropos if they'd had the Wizarding Wireless turned on listening to the Beach Boys playing "Good Vibrations"(I have that album)! Guess in this case the old adage, "Practice makes perfect" really rings true for Harry and Ginny. Glad Bill and Fleur were with them! Poor Charlie about came unglued when he thought Anna was preggers! Would've loved to have seen the look on his face! I guess magical folk wouldn't use Dramamine! Can't wait to see how Anna does meeting and flying with the dragons! Ron sure has come up with a brilliant(no surprise there) yet dangerous plan for he and Neville to pull off! I don't blame Hermoine for being concerned! It'll be interesting to see if you have Neville remember to take the Sword of Gryffindor with him or if it'll appear when he needs it! Can't wait for the next one! Hope your hubby is OK and he is still in my prayers! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Love the Beach Boys ;) Our magical friends could really use a beach holiday - instead of endless practice and war prep! The scene between Anna and Charlie was half written before I decided she ought to take some type of potion to settle her stomach. Once the idea popped into my mind, I ran with it! I'm glad you liked the bit about Ron, Hermione, and Neville (even though he wasn't technically in the scene). I could easily imagine Ron staring at the chess board and seeing the flaw in the plan. Thank you so much for this lovely review and for the prayers - my hubby is much better now :)




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