Reviews For The Awaiting Reunion
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.08.01 - 01:27PM Title: Chapter 1
LOL. Sweet and short like an essay. Good job.
Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2017.08.01 - 07:06AM Title: Chapter 1
The Grammar is quite distracting! There are also some improper phrases. Other than that, a little more substance would have been good. It is a good attempt for a first work. Keep on writing and you will get better provided you learn where you go wrong.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.08.01 - 03:35AM Title: Chapter 1
Great little story. I like Ginnyís reaction, itís quite believable. Little does she know that Harry will soon leave her behind for another year.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.07.31 - 07:03PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the slap and the snog!!!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.07.31 - 03:30PM Title: Chapter 1
Short and sweet.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.07.31 - 12:37PM Title: Chapter 1
A scene that's been done many times, but I really like your version. I think it captures the feelings of both Harry and Ginny really well and portrays their meeting in a very believable manner. Well done!