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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.12.13 - 10:00AM Title: Chapter 4: Hogwarts Express

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I love your story so far. You're doing the "Harry with future memories" thing quite well. I like that the memories he has are so different from canon. It's an original and interesting twist to that kind of story.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it so far!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.12.09 - 04:17PM Title: Chapter 4: Hogwarts Express

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Fascinating premise to your story! I'm curious to see where you plan to take it. Sad to think of a world where Ginny and Hermione are both killed during their first year at Hogwarts.

Author's Response: I wasn't too sure what I was going to do with Hermione tbh. I wanted this to be a darker fantasy and I feel this way matches that genre better than one of my other plans.



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.12.08 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 4: Hogwarts Express

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Some things don't change, but other do. I wonder what the Sorting hat will do. Hufflepuff would be a good house for Harry.
Great chapter!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.12.08 - 06:44AM Title: Chapter 4: Hogwarts Express

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Ah, another interesting chapter. Obviously, a lot of things happened in the other time line that need to be fixed by Harry.

I just hope that Harry won't get a Death Eater as Head of House. I'm afraid, he'd become insane living in the damp, semi-dark dorms under the Black Lake.

Author's Response: *Grins evily* I think how I have dealt with the sorting is fairly original. At least I haven't read another fic that does it. Harry does need some help though, his previous life finally looking really good and suddenly Voldemort and his Death Eaters come along and fuck everything up. So he's biased, and I hope I'm not revealing too much but someone will help him get passed that. Finally, this is a personal apology to you since you've reviewed every chapter so far. I'm super sorry this took so long. Fortunately I'm already halfway finished with the next chapter and I should have it out in two weeks at the latest (I'll be out of town next week for a very much needed vacation from work)




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