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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.01.28 - 07:11AM Title: Year 2 Chapter 7: The Chamber Has Been Opened
It seems Harry delegates all responsibilities concerning Ginny to others. He let Ron and Hermione bring Ginny back to the common room and not to the Hospital Wing, although she felt dizzy and passed out only moments ago. It's more important to him to bring Filch's cat to the Hospital Wing. That's odd, isn't it? I'm already quite curious whom he'll send down into the chamber to rescue her.
As far as you're planning changes to the canon storyline, please, feel free to change as much as possible. It would be odd if a Harry who is more then ten years older and much stronger then the others would not change things, would it?
On the other hand, it seems the Nephalem blood in Harry is wearing out. At least I can't see anything of his increased endurance, strength, etc. anymore. He's barely able to drag his feet to the classrooms.
Author's Response: Thanks Gin, I need reviews like this. For changes, I initially wanted to follow canon as close as possible, but it's becoming harder to keep it that way and the story wants the changes and I feel happier when I do them. The Nephalem blood bonuses are going to be more prevalent in 4th year and after when things start to become more dangerous, right now we've only seen a few points where it applies, but I could be doing a better job showing the changes during them.
