Reviewer: Dad Signed
2017.08.16 - 09:30AM
Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
I thought the story line from chapter one to chapter two was a big jump. Did Sirius turn up? Intrigued to see what happens to the characters you have used.
Author's Response: *nods*. They aren't really "Chapter 1" and "Chapter 2" as such, but rather a flashback "Prologue" (technically also for the already posted "Legacy of the Dark Knight part 1: Ginny Weasley and the Squire of Wordenshire") and "Chapter 1" of "Legacy of the Dark Knight part 2: Jamie Prosser and the Fourth Champion".
The Sirius plotline has been plotted out and I'll be picking it up again either later in "JPatFC" or in a third part.
The main PoV characters will be Jamie and Harry, but we will be checking in on Ginny at least a couple of times and I've got at least one more DC Comics character planned for a recurring role.