SIYE Time:20:50 on 24th November 2017

Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.10.11 - 12:37PM Title: Prologue: The Prisoner of Azkaban


It makes it difficult to read when the chapters have nothing to do with the last one. Black escapes, Alfred dies and now we are back at Hogwarts....
Still, pacy writing.

Author's Response: That's a fair point, however there are general story arc reasons for including the Prologue. I can assure you that the following chapters will run more consistently and logically so you shouldn't have any further issues there.

Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.09.23 - 11:50PM Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express


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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.08.16 - 09:30AM Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express


I thought the story line from chapter one to chapter two was a big jump. Did Sirius turn up? Intrigued to see what happens to the characters you have used.

Author's Response: *nods*. They aren't really "Chapter 1" and "Chapter 2" as such, but rather a flashback "Prologue" (technically also for the already posted "Legacy of the Dark Knight part 1: Ginny Weasley and the Squire of Wordenshire") and "Chapter 1" of "Legacy of the Dark Knight part 2: Jamie Prosser and the Fourth Champion". The Sirius plotline has been plotted out and I'll be picking it up again either later in "JPatFC" or in a third part. The main PoV characters will be Jamie and Harry, but we will be checking in on Ginny at least a couple of times and I've got at least one more DC Comics character planned for a recurring role.

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