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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 12:04PM Title: 1 Escape
Well some times boys need to be put in there place...kutgw
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.08.29 - 08:49AM Title: 1 Escape
Intriguing start. I'm quite curious how you'll tie the two plot lines together.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.08.26 - 01:33PM Title: 1 Escape
I am a bit lost. I think I need to wait for the next instalment to make senses of the story so far. Interesting
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.08.26 - 01:32PM Title: 1 Escape
I am a bit lost. I think I need to wait for the next instalment to make senses of the story so far. Interesting
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.08.26 - 01:32PM Title: 1 Escape
I am a bit lost. I think I need to wait for the next instalment to make senses of the story so far. Interesting
Author's Response: Patience is gold :) I hope the story stays interesting! There will be six chapters, and things should start to come along by Chapter 4...
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.08.25 - 09:18PM Title: 1 Escape
Interesting beginning! I'm quite concerned about what is happening and what this creature is.
Author's Response: Good to know it keeps readers wondering... You can take a guess, and if you're well-informed about east asian mythologies, I think you've got a fair chance on getting it right.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.08.25 - 08:52AM Title: 1 Escape
I certainly look forward to finding out more about this creature and why the suitcase was in a boys school in Rugby.
Author's Response: You will, eventually...
