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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2017.09.19 - 06:10PM Title: Chapter 2

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I was quite taken aback by the vehemence of Ginny's attack on Harry. I think Harry is right, she should know him better and know he wouldn't plan something like that.

I am presuming, like I think Harry is, that Ginny has grabbed his cloak (invisibility?) and broom and has remained hidden.



Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 01:18AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.09.06 - 08:12PM Title: Chapter 2

If there is one thing ginny and harry did well together is know when danger is a foot , to retreat and get reinforcements...as for ginny leaving, I'm surprise she lasted as long as she did.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I do hope I got the way Harry and Ginny act in the face of danger right. That can be tricky to do, especially if you want to write a compelling plot.



Reviewer: Fl4v1nh4 Signed Date: 2017.09.01 - 02:18AM Title: Chapter 2

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Boy, was Ginny mad 😳 We know Harry still likes her and I think she still likes him but we didn't read it from her perspective... She is going after them and I hope she can help Harry. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've had nothing but positive reviews so far from this, other than some strange gripes about the intricacies of shield charms. It's really good to hear! Next chapter should provide a lot of answers!



Reviewer: Kungfupanda Signed Date: 2017.08.31 - 01:37PM Title: Chapter 2

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Well you definitely have me hooked. I guess that top secret tent wasn't so hard to find after all, can't wait to read how Harry escapes this one (maybe Ginny will save him). Great chapter and story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! Next chapter shouldn't disappoint you!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.08.31 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 2

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Seems to be a lot of unresolved tension still between Harry and Ginny! Meanwhile, it didn't take long for Savage to catch up with the two of them. I wonder what Savage and his friends are up to? And where did Ginny go, just hidden under the Invisibility Cloak? Even when mad at him, I can't imagine her running out on Harry when there was trouble. Can't wait to find out more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, lots of unresolved tension, but Ginny isn't cruel, just hotheaded. It will become clear in the next chapter!




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