Reviews For Tengu and Ninja's Daughter
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.11.24 - 11:17PM Title: Chapter 10 Bridge Over Troubled Water
Strong start, strong ending.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.11.24 - 10:35PM Title: Chapter 8 Torn Pages and a Lie
Ah man, is time travel about to be introduced into this....
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 06:48PM Title: Chapter 7 Crack
If Harry thought these eggs were important to his investigation, wouldn't he have the proper authorization to examine the eggs? They had to wait until the next day to look at the eggs? I'm sure they could have just sent a message to Kingsley and received permission. I realize it was to give MacNeil the time to do whatever he did, but it didn't really flow. Harry doesn't seem like this is an urgent investigation - going to parties, visiting people unofficially. I didn't get the whole 'come back from the Veil'. Is that a euphemism for dying?
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 6 The Secret of Kappa's Egg
Its very sad that Xavier and Newt's relationship had strained to such a point that Xavier would be so disrespectful to his father. He basically turned his father in to the Ministry - not even Percy did that. I was surprised that Harry learns that Malfoy is going to Japan and decides to go to a Halloween party. It didn't make a lot of sense. He's an Auror, he can visit and question people without a pretext.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 11:42AM Title: Chapter 10 Bridge Over Troubled Water
A very good chapter.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter 10 Bridge Over Troubled Water
Very nice ending...kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 07:12AM Title: Chapter 8 Torn Pages and a Lie
The paragraph spacing is very annoying.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.11 - 05:39PM Title: Chapter 9 Second Victim
MacNeil is about to see harry in a whole new light I think...kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.11 - 03:04PM Title: Chapter 8 Torn Pages and a Lie
Now Draco is going to see what happens when you use harry instead of abouse harry....kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.10 - 08:11AM Title: Chapter 7 Crack
Ah Draco has a soul after all....kutgw
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.11.05 - 03:51PM Title: Chapter 3 The First Victim
If Albus does complain to his father, I hope Harry ignores him. Al is just like Malfoy was years ago - 'Wait until my father hears about this.' That being said, Minerva should reprimand Malfoy for his behavior. Again, no one to root for in this story - make someone likeable. Draco is horrible so who really cares if he's killed or loses everything.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.11.05 - 08:23AM Title: Chapter 6 The Secret of Kappa's Egg
It is an interesting story, but the Malfoys cannot seem to decide who's side they are on. Keep going.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.05 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 6 The Secret of Kappa's Egg
Ah the sound of defeat before even trying out...nit a good way to go through life....kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.05 - 05:24AM Title: Chapter 5 Flight Before Halloween
Ah Malfoy you maybe smart but sometimes you need a hand and hiding something is never the way to go.....kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.04 - 08:41PM Title: Chapter 4 Freshwater Plimpies
Malfoy if he was smart he listened to Luna and make it work in the long run....kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.01 - 06:19AM Title: Chapter 3 The First Victim
Al everyone is learning at the moment but Albus still has Ginny temper to contend with....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.10.31 - 04:48PM Title: Chapter 4 Freshwater Plimpies
I have not made my mind up yet about this story. I cannot feel any sympathy with the characters. Do we know what use the eggs will be?
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 2
There really aren't any sympathetic characters in this story. Draco and Scorpius are bullies. Al is whiny - 'If Malfoy wouldn't evaluate students fairly, he was prepared to consult his father.' What? He has a headmistress as well as a head of house to go to before going to his father. 'My father will never allow him to have a prejudice against me.' I don't know exactly what he is trying to say. I'm guessing Al is saying his father won't allow Draco to be biased against him? That is an offense worth going to Azkaban? He didn't go for being a Death Eater, I don't think he'll be sent to Azkaban for being a horrid, petty, biased teacher - after all, Snape wasn't.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 1
Malfoy is even worse than Snape. Why would he get away with it? Snape did because he was a spy - Malfoy is a marked Death Eater, he shouldn't be allowed in a position of power. The story is interesting, but you introduced a lot in Albus' essay. A bit more explanation would be helpful - I'm guessing this is based on some other myths or stories? I had to look up the places you mentioned and the tengu - never heard of any of them . Even if it is in your author's note, it would be nice to provide some context for the story. Not everyone will be familiar with both as you obviously are.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.10.15 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice to see the kids are playing so well!!!!!!sometimes rose is smarter then her mother and is using some of the brains from her father as well isnít he planing of the future....kutgw