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SIYE Time:6:51 on 20th August 2018


Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 2

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There really aren't any sympathetic characters in this story. Draco and Scorpius are bullies. Al is whiny - 'If Malfoy wouldn't evaluate students fairly, he was prepared to consult his father.' What? He has a headmistress as well as a head of house to go to before going to his father. 'My father will never allow him to have a prejudice against me.' I don't know exactly what he is trying to say. I'm guessing Al is saying his father won't allow Draco to be biased against him? That is an offense worth going to Azkaban? He didn't go for being a Death Eater, I don't think he'll be sent to Azkaban for being a horrid, petty, biased teacher - after all, Snape wasn't.

Author's Response: Hmm, I just wanted to give them the different roles, if I followed the rule, typical Draco or Scorp, readers could guess easily what will happen next. I try to avoid the typical style everyone writes here and there. I respect your opinions though. : ) Thank you for stopping by.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.10.15 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice to see the kids are playing so well!!!!!!sometimes rose is smarter then her mother and is using some of the brains from her father as well isnít he planing of the future....kutgw

Author's Response: More chapters coming. I hope readers on this site will enjoy my story from here.




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