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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.31 - 02:50PM Title: Chapter 3

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Well more people re going to wonder what’s going on shortly i think...kutgw

Author's Response: Will they, or won't they???? MNF



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.03.05 - 01:16PM Title: Chapter 3

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I'm glad Molly's helping the two of them, unfortunately, that's not common in fanfic.
On the other hand, if Molly has no objections, their Halloween project doesn't seem to be too dangerous.

Poor Dean, actually I think he's an okay bloke. Unfortunately, his name is on a list of people, i.a. in the company with one Mr Corner, and one Mrs Chang. Whenever those people are mentioned in a story, my heart misses a beat, even in stories where those people never were close friends with Ginny or Harry, lol.

I'm quite curious if the story is over once Harry talked with his parents, or if you're planning more. Oh, please be aware that I never ask for spoilers, I'm just pondering aloud!

Author's Response: This is a bit of a different fic, but Molly just thinks Harry wants to celebrate Samhaim and get to converse with his family, especially Sirius, who Molly realizes he's missing deeply. From Molly's perspective, it isn't dangerous. I think Dean is fine too, but he is overbearing in canon, so I decided to use that plot point to give Ginny time with Harry. This story will be about twenty chapters, at least that's what I think I will do. Sometimes my stories take on a life of their own. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.11.24 - 11:18PM Title: Chapter 3

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I have just caught up with this story.
I am enjoying it. I like that Harry is researching something interesting and having Ginny help him.
Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Hi Carolyn, Sorry it's taken so long to respond. Late November/December was chaotic and then I got sick on January 3 and I'm only just feeling better. I'm writing Fanfics while I'm editing two books. Never a dull moment here. Glad you're enojoying it. A new chapter should be up very soon. MNF



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2017.10.23 - 05:44PM Title: Chapter 3

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Your story is holding my interest. :)

One little error: "No, you good. The Statute of Secrecy kicks..."

I believe you meant "goof" there.

Author's Response: Glad it's hold your interest, and yes, I'm human -- as is my beta. MNF



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.10.23 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 3

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This was an interesting chapter! Harry and Ginny seem to be getting right along with the potion! Never understood what Ginny saw in a jerk like Dean! I can see where she'd be a bit touchy about money matters tho! Glad she ends up with Harry! Can't wait to see what you do next with this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying this. Just posted a new chapter. I'm in the process of editing two books, and was very ill so evverything is slow in my life. MNF




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