Reviews For Selfish
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.12.30 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.12.05 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful, little anecdote. I loved it.
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.12.01 - 01:06PM Title: Chapter 1
A charming, beautifully touching glimpse into the moments we all wished we could have seen. Your phrasing took me right in there, almost (but fortunately not quite) to the point where it felt like I was intruding. Very much hope you continue to share your talent with words!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.12.01 - 06:41AM Title: Chapter 1
I am not sure about the use of the present tense. It reads a bit like a voice over in a film scene.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 11:30PM Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet! Good characterizations - I like the fumbling and uncertainty merging into certainty. Very nice!