Reviews For Together
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.04.16 - 08:32PM Title: Chapter 7 - Running Up That Hill
Outstanding chapter, with Harry and Ginny finally back together! Excellent, extremely exciting action and intense emotions!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.04.16 - 02:12PM Title: Chapter 7 - Running Up That Hill
Not sure why Robards is being such a jerk but he is partly responsible for what happened --- and Harry was spot on! Hope Ron is okay and I'm assuming he is if he was able to propose to Hermoine! I hope they got Rowle but if not his days are numbered! Can't wait for the next chapter! (I actually read this first on the other site) :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Celtics534 Signed Date: 2018.04.14 - 02:29PM Title: Chapter 7 - Running Up That Hill
Oh Golly Miss Molly!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.04.14 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter 7 - Running Up That Hill
Love the dramatic end. K. However, is there a chance of shooting both Robards and Savage withHarry’sbrand of Sectumsempra? Those idiots should not be running the Auror Dept in the first place!
Reviewer: Celtics534 Signed Date: 2018.04.11 - 01:21AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
So well written!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2018.04.06 - 10:04PM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.03.21 - 10:52PM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
Very exciting scene!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.03.20 - 02:37PM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
Oh for the love of Merlin! Excellent!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.03.20 - 02:11PM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.03.20 - 09:25AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
It's been a great chapter, as well written as the story itself.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.03.20 - 09:21AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Found a Reason
Quite a startling finish to this one for sure! The Lestranges create a diversion so Rowle can strike and ruin the ceremony! Had to have had inside help! Glad to see Harry recovered from his hangover and Hermoine and Ron try to kick some sense into him about Ginny - he definitely needs her! I hope they get the bad guys soon! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 08:52AM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
OMG!!!! I literally laughed out loud at the end :) This chapter was an emotional roller coaster, and to be honest I still want to smack both Harry and Ginny, but well done!
Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.02.22 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
Harry's conversation with Andromeda was very interesting. She had to choose between becoming a Healer and her love, and she'd chosen the latter. I wonder what Harry will choose, accept Kingsley's offer, and devote his life to the Auror Department as successor to Robbard, or pursue his love. Somehow I have the feeling that Harry's choice will be a different one than Andromeda's. Although the latter was the reason he came back from the Kings Cross Limbo instead of staying with his parents, it's somehow never an issue in post-Hogwarts stories.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.02.22 - 10:57AM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
Poor Harry, jus when he works up the courage to talk to Ginny, he sees here hanging around with her old boyfriend. Hopefully Hermione was right and its not what it looks like, but it has still put another delay in their reconciliation.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.02.21 - 07:22PM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
Misunderstandings the bane of every relationship. Great chapter though
Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.02.21 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
In my own headcanon, Harry and Ginny split up and then get back, too. Probably inspired by my own personal experience: heck, hubby and I got on and off several times.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.21 - 11:55AM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
I actually thought this was a really good chapter! Hate to see Harry and Ginny still apart and Harry in such a dither about it! Thought he might have gotten it together there toward the end to get Ginny back but alcohol and the green eyed monster didn't make a good combo as Cho found out the hard way! Hope Harry has hangover potion at home! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.02.21 - 11:06AM Title: Chapter 5 - Zombie
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Harry's pain was palpable and it felt perfectly realistic. It had to be terribly difficult to write and, I suspect, it will be equally difficult to find a realistic way to bring them back together. I look forward to your next installment!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.02.09 - 04:42AM Title: Chapter 2 - Next of Kin
It's funny how differently we see things unfolding after the way and upon reunion. My our show the characters as being tentative and almost shell shocked, I see them as compulsively driven to have life together. Nevertheless, you write it so well that I have no problem with your approach. Dare say, it feels right. NEXCELLENT WORK!
Reviewer: SeekerDan Signed Date: 2018.01.16 - 06:26PM Title: Chapter 1 - On The Nature of Daylight
To find someone that feels the same about the nineteen years in-between is brilliant. I too turned to fanfiction, and whislt I have read many, many good stories, so far I have found only one author who really feels the void. If you haven't read anything by him yet, then I highly recommend Northumbrian, you can find his stories here on SIYE and even more on other sites.