Reviews For Together
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 08:28AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday
I'm glad you mentioned in a response to another review that you had a different version of the final scene on fanfiction.net. I read it over there and laughed out loud at the innocent awkwardness of it all :) In a few well written lines you also captured the love between Harry and Ginny that they have not quite managed to articulate. Looking forward to your next chapter (and requesting that if you shy away from pushing the r rating on this site, you tell us in the author's notes that this version is edited for content)!!!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.04 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday
Good job! Well done,you!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 08:12PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday
Happy birthday Harry.
Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 10:17AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday
You seem to be reading my own thoughts on how things after the battle should have been. Also, I appreciate you skipping over the actual sex. The scene was beautifully written. Keep up the good work!