Reviews For Together
Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2019.05.17 - 05:31AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday Okay Reviewer: mini Signed Date: 2018.08.27 - 02:09PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday Lol I liked this chapter. It shows how Harry and Ginny are maturing Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday Great chapter. Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 08:28AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday I'm glad you mentioned in a response to another review that you had a different version of the final scene on fanfiction.net. I read it over there and laughed out loud at the innocent awkwardness of it all :) In a few well written lines you also captured the love between Harry and Ginny that they have not quite managed to articulate. Looking forward to your next chapter (and requesting that if you shy away from pushing the r rating on this site, you tell us in the author's notes that this version is edited for content)!!! Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.04 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday Good job! Well done,you! Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 08:12PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday Happy birthday Harry. Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 10:17AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday You seem to be reading my own thoughts on how things after the battle should have been. Also, I appreciate you skipping over the actual sex. The scene was beautifully written. Keep up the good work! | |||||||
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