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Reviewer: mini Signed Date: 2018.08.27 - 02:09PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

Lol I liked this chapter. It shows how Harry and Ginny are maturing


Author's Response: Thanks :)



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.05 - 08:28AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

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I'm glad you mentioned in a response to another review that you had a different version of the final scene on fanfiction.net. I read it over there and laughed out loud at the innocent awkwardness of it all :) In a few well written lines you also captured the love between Harry and Ginny that they have not quite managed to articulate. Looking forward to your next chapter (and requesting that if you shy away from pushing the r rating on this site, you tell us in the author's notes that this version is edited for content)!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I will certainly make sure to update the author's notes and add a link to my ffn, but I'm glad in the meantime that you were able to find it! I'm really trying to articulate the kind of desperate mania of the emotions Harry and Ginny are feeling. The highs are high and the lows are low. I could ramble on forever but I greatly appreciate your response to this chapter!



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.04 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

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Good job! Well done,you!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 08:12PM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

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Happy birthday Harry.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!



Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.01.03 - 10:17AM Title: Chapter 3 - Summer Holiday

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You seem to be reading my own thoughts on how things after the battle should have been. Also, I appreciate you skipping over the actual sex. The scene was beautifully written. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really trying to make this fic as realistic as possible after spending so much time wading through unnecessarily melodramatic fic, though (haha) I must admit that with regards to sex there is a much racier version posted to fanfiction.net, but I thought I would clean it up a little for SIYE ;)




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