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Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2018.09.05 - 09:27PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


"Happy Christmas," she mumbled sleepily before her eyes shot wide open in surprise. "Hang on, Harry. Was that really my only present?"


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Author's Response: oops sent before i was finished! thanks! i really hope you're continuing to enjoy the story. the later chapters tend to get a bit darker unfortunately :(

Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.06.08 - 05:08AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


Very cute chapter! Making Audrey a Muggle ... mwah, ha, ha! Evil and funny at the same time. I am so used to Audrey the Healer ... Audrey the Ministry hot-shot ... Audrey, Hermione lite! But now we have Audrey the scared shitless Muggle! Too rich!

Author's Response: Audrey is the only Weasley spouse that we know nothing about!! So characterizations of her as simply "girl" Percy in fic have always rubbed me the wrong way because we have literally have been given a canon character who is totally a blank slate!! Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.05 - 09:22PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


This was a really fun chapter especially with all the great revelations! Glad the bad guys didn't ruin it! Nice little cliffy at the end but I would expect Harry got Ginny a real present! Hate that we have to wait to find out! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: Celtics534 Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


Gotta love a good sneaky George! Excellent as always. The way you portray Ginny is well done, in my opinion. I think with her brothers she would be a little sharper with her humor. It's feels true to a sibling relationship, but that may because I'm a little sharp with my sarcasm and my sister takes a deal of it. Looking forward to the more regular updates, if this is how you plan to go!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 10:48AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


I love the interactions here! I only have one sibling (an older brother), but we have been known to snap towels (leaving welts) and steal desserts (running down the street with an entire pie). And we're in our 40s. Sarcasm and insults are an integral part of our relationship too. I love that George paid Charlie to sleep on the couch, and then threatened to make Harry pay if he didn't have the cloak. I loved Ginny's sass in this.

Is it wrong that I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop? "Oh, Harry and Ginny are having a lovely holiday... I wonder what's about to go wrong?" I mean, if it were all sunshine and butterflies it wouldn't be Harry Potter, right?

I also love how you ended this chapter. I laughed out loud!

Author's Response: Oh, Harry and Ginny have their fair share of trials coming, to be sure. Hopefully they can stick through them together ;) I'm glad that you appreciated the biting remarks, etc. I love, love, love imagining the Weasley family dynamics so it's fun to get to drop the drama for a second and just play around with them. Thank you for your lovely reviews. They truly make my day each time I read them!!

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side


Love Audrey. Excellent.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! They are always much appreciated :)

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