Reviews For Together
Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2018.09.05 - 09:27PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
"Happy Christmas," she mumbled sleepily before her eyes shot wide open in surprise. "Hang on, Harry. Was that really my only present?"
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.06.08 - 05:08AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
Very cute chapter! Making Audrey a Muggle ... mwah, ha, ha! Evil and funny at the same time. I am so used to Audrey the Healer ... Audrey the Ministry hot-shot ... Audrey, Hermione lite! But now we have Audrey the scared shitless Muggle! Too rich!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.05 - 09:22PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
This was a really fun chapter especially with all the great revelations! Glad the bad guys didn't ruin it! Nice little cliffy at the end but I would expect Harry got Ginny a real present! Hate that we have to wait to find out! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Celtics534 Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
Gotta love a good sneaky George! Excellent as always. The way you portray Ginny is well done, in my opinion. I think with her brothers she would be a little sharper with her humor. It's feels true to a sibling relationship, but that may because I'm a little sharp with my sarcasm and my sister takes a deal of it. Looking forward to the more regular updates, if this is how you plan to go!
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 10:48AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
I love the interactions here! I only have one sibling (an older brother), but we have been known to snap towels (leaving welts) and steal desserts (running down the street with an entire pie). And we're in our 40s. Sarcasm and insults are an integral part of our relationship too. I love that George paid Charlie to sleep on the couch, and then threatened to make Harry pay if he didn't have the cloak. I loved Ginny's sass in this.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 9 - Time Is On My Side
Love Audrey. Excellent.