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Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2018.09.15 - 01:31AM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

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Ugh perfect hHArry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Kim Signed Date: 2018.09.13 - 05:42AM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

I really enjoyed the chapter.
Harry not asking for back-up is always annoying me a bit, but it is so characteristic!
American English wouldn't annoy me, but the again, English isn't my first language anyway, so I don't mind either way

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review!



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.09.12 - 08:22PM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

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I don’t see why you think you should stick to fluff. This scene was very nicely written. Thank you!

Author's Response: thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.09.10 - 07:08PM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

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It doesn't matter which English you use this is magnificent! Glad Dung's lead panned out! Great to see the Leschmuck brothers finally get nailed! The Ol Super Six, minus Harry, to the rescue! Too bad Kingsley didn't sack Robards too! Terrific chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.09.10 - 05:09PM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

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Not sure if Harry was wise to wade in with no backup. Good for Ginny.

Author's Response: Yeah I think I might actually rework that part of the Chapter frankly... I think it take Some a harry past the point of rash and into stupid territory



Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.09.10 - 11:49AM Title: Chapter 14 - First Love, Late Spring

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Whew! That was a thriller! i think you're better at action than you think. This was really good (and terrifying). Poor Harry nearly lost everything. But honestly, if you were an auror and in trouble wouldn't you want Neville, Luna, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny coming to your rescue? Dumbledore's Army for yet another win!

I'm glad Kingsley is sacking Savage and Williamson, but what about Robards and Proudfoot? Especially Robards! He's so afraid of being shown up by Harry that he allowed that farce of an investigation to flounder along for months.

Yay for Ginny raising the alarm, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your review! I worry sometimes that my action writing can seem cheesy or contrived, so I carry a lot of insecurity I guess, but it’s wonderful that you seem to enjoy each chapter!! I really appreciate your consideration of the story!!




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