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Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.09.27 - 01:18AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Start of Something

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Beautiful! Maybe not in the literal sense as relates to the birth, but a beautiful chapter. And I love Ron's speech! It was so perfect. It put me in the mind of his speech when he returned during the horcrux hunt. Well done! And so glad that Hermione f i n a l l y told the truth. This brought back happy and funny memories of when my first child was born, so thanks for that :)

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.09.25 - 06:36AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Start of Something

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Excellent long and interesting chapter covering so many threads including Hermione’s reasons for not wanting or having a baby. James Sirius arrives! Well done, you!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.09.24 - 07:13PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Start of Something

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What a terrific triple dipper! And here I thought only Florian Fortescue could do that! That 3rd chapter brought back memories of my 3 when they were born and how Mrs. Auror almost broke my hand squeezing it during labor!! Also reminded me of when I arrived to see my 4 grandchildren after they were born! Excellently done! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!



Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.09.24 - 04:57PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Start of Something

I've enjoyed the updates a lot, specially the last chapter. I can relate to the swearing during labour and the GET IT OUT! part, XD . Good work! *claps*

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you! Having never given birth myself I did a lot of painstaking (and scary) research into labour and delivery lol



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.09.24 - 04:39PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Start of Something

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A very delightful chapter. It really seemed like we were there with Harry and Ginny for this important moment. I'm glad Hermione and Ron seem to have gotten their acts together again, too.

Author's Response: I appreciate your review! To make a reader feel as though they were in a moment with H/G is such a lovely thing to hear as a writer.




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