Reviewer: melindaleo Signed
2018.01.07 - 11:10AM
I really liked this chapter! I'm always so hesitant to go against canon, but this one fits nicely in alongside canon. I'll admit, the last chapter made me a bit uncomfortable. I know it wasn't her intent, but I felt it came off like Ginny was using Harry a little bit, and it made me uncomfortable.
I like this one much better and getting a peek inside their minds as Ron's life was threatened. I also liked Ginny's realization that she wanted Harry and not Dean there as she worried with her family. Favorite part would be the three of them linking arms in solidarity as they awaited news.
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with the story! I really struggled with the last chapter. I wrote the entire story before I wrote the lucky adventure and valentine's date because it was so challenging for me to portray the dark side of the lucky potion and Ginny's low point in the story without making her seem too out of character. Ginny wasn't herself under the influence, but I think the way I wrote the aftermath of that left a lot to be desired. I appreciate the feedback as always!