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Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 04:19AM Title: A Crushing Defeat

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It won't let me read any further. Please continue this fun story.

Author's Response: I'm posting new chapters as fast as I can! There will likely be about 16 chapters. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 12:13PM Title: A Crushing Defeat

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Wow! Dean and Seamus were both insensitive prats. At least Hermione and Ginny can support one another. Looking forward to reading your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! In HBP, Hermione had mentioned to Harry that Ginny and Dean had argued about his head injury, so I couldn't resist including this! I might edit this chapter and the last one and publish them both separately as missing moments. The argument in this chapter and Ron and Ginny's conversation in the last chapter were two scenes I'd wished had somehow been in HBP.



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 11:13AM Title: A Crushing Defeat

Loved this chapter! I always wondered what was going on with the others when Harry was unconscious, and I'm really glad Ginny and Hermione laid into Dean and Seamus for their insensitivity. My favorite part, though, was Ginny and Ron's conversation. I loved how you showed Ron's conflict. He loves Harry, too, and tries to protect Ginny from being hurt even if that's impossible. You showed this without a lot of soppy words that aren't Ron's style, and I think you handled it really, really well. Nicely done!

Author's Response: I love writing Ron, and I've been wanting to write that conversation in the Hospital Wing for years! Thanks for the kind words!




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