Reviews For Feelings Detained
Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 04:19AM Title: A Crushing Defeat It won't let me read any further. Please continue this fun story. Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 12:13PM Title: A Crushing Defeat Wow! Dean and Seamus were both insensitive prats. At least Hermione and Ginny can support one another. Looking forward to reading your next chapter! Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.07 - 11:13AM Title: A Crushing Defeat Loved this chapter! I always wondered what was going on with the others when Harry was unconscious, and I'm really glad Ginny and Hermione laid into Dean and Seamus for their insensitivity. My favorite part, though, was Ginny and Ron's conversation. I loved how you showed Ron's conflict. He loves Harry, too, and tries to protect Ginny from being hurt even if that's impossible. You showed this without a lot of soppy words that aren't Ron's style, and I think you handled it really, really well. Nicely done! | |||||||
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