SIYE Time:17:06 on 23rd October 2018

Reviews For Feelings Detained

Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 11:55AM Title: The Unexpected Occlumens

Great update! I've always thought Ginny would be a better Occlumens than Harry simply by her ability to remain calm, cool and collected while telling an outright lie, lol. Snape is such a git, and I have no trouble seeing him needling her over her experience in the Chamber. I was afraid he was going to outright humiliate the both of them over their feelings for one another.

Author's Response: I figured that Snape would want an audience if he was going to outright humiliate them. Besides, simply humiliating them might have had the unintended side effect of bringing them together -- and I imagine that would be the last thing Snape would want to do. It just felt like such a Snape thing to do to let Harry feel like he'd pulled one over on him by snagging an extra detention -- only to have Snape make it the worst detention ever! Thanks for the review!

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