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Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 12:17PM Title: Riddle Returns

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Fantastic update! Its such a Snape thing to do, and the boggart was truly terrifying! I loved your creativeness on the threats Tom used against Ginny, and like Harry, I liked that it was him she called for. I felt bad for Harry that the fact Ginny chose Dean was equally distressing to him as some of the other horrors of his past. For me, the scariest part of canon was the graveyard scene. The first time I read it, it was truly terrifying, and I always imagine some of that terror comes back near Dementors. Really, really Well done.

PS - And I remembered the starts this time! I usually don't even think of it until the moment I hit submit!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the stars! I agree, the graveyard scene was really scary! I think that the fact Ginny chose Dean is really hurtful to Harry because it reminds him how alone he is. I'd chosen those horrors because they were all cases in which someone Harry loved had left him.



Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 09:40AM Title: Riddle Returns

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What a utter irredeamable baatard. I'd bet that Dumbledore is manipulating things behind the scenes worried that his weapon won't work if he has something/someone to live for.

Author's Response: Dumbledore definitely has a darker side, but I hope he wouldn't go that far! In this case, Snape was acting alone. Once he realized that Harry wanted to be in detention, he decided to make it unbearable.




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