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SIYE Time:17:05 on 23rd October 2018

Reviews For Feelings Detained

Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.15 - 06:26PM Title: The Mood Mallow

Aww, poor Harry. Fred and George really do know how to wind him up. I suppose it isn't bad to get an emotionally-repressed Harry to share a little, but I can't help but sympathize with him. How embarrassing. And I snorted when Ron was so dimwitted to ask Ginny to move so he could see whom Harry fancied. Oh, I feel so bad for Harry at this point I want to wrap my arms around him and shield him from everyone until this passes. Cringe. It's funny, but it's not!

Okay, all I could picture was Smurfs during the encounter with Ginny, lol. Sweet though, and I'm glad Ginny finally realized that she'd hurt him. Still, she'd pushed him to confront what his feelings meant, then retreated herself when he did. What a mess. I really hope Harry gets to have the last laugh on Fred and George!

Author's Response: Agree that it's not bad to get Harry to share a little :) I think Ginny is playing with fire and finally realized that she's going to get burned if she doesn't wise up. As you see in the next chapter, she retreats because she's afraid. I think most of the Gryffindors carry a lot of fear, which is why they all value courage so much. Ginny has to face her fears to find the courage to sort out this awful mess!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.14 - 06:57PM Title: The Mood Mallow

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Ouch! That was certainly awkward.

Author's Response: So awkward! This might be an unintended trend in my stories. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2018.01.14 - 05:33AM Title: The Mood Mallow

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My heart really goes out to Harry. Throughout the series/story he's had to kinda wear his heart out on his sleeve (mostly in front of an audience) while Ginny just chose to ignore it. After this chapter, if she decides to choose Harry over Dean (especially if Dean ends up rubbing her the wrong way), it would just seem like she was using Dean and that would be a bit out-of-character for her I think. Then again, I also think it's a bit out of character for Harry to continue putting himself in vulnerable situations (choossing to stay around Ginny while under the influence of the mood spell, etc) when Ginny already knows how he feels. But! This a story and I am loving it overall. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, I agree that I’m stretching the limits with both characters :) I know I should have cut this chapter, but I liked it so I didn’t. Harry’s taken quite a beating in this series, but at this point he’s fairly certain Ginny still has feelings for him. In HBP, kissing her after the Quidditch match was incredibly bold (he didn’t even know if she liked him back!), so I hoped having him put himself out there a bit wouldn’t be completely unbelievable.



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.13 - 08:45PM Title: The Mood Mallow

Great chapter. Ginny knows how Harry feels she just needs to figure out her feelings


Author's Response: Thanks! Ginny will finally explore this in the next chapter!




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